LIGHTNING
The lighting arrives on the
undeveloped tiger paw
As it perches considering
the country city
on restrained bases
and then proceeds on.
L.I. Literary devices: Personification
Parts of speech: Verbs
S.C.
All capital letters and full stops used correctly
Write using personification i.e. the object you chose is a person
Must use interesting verbs (use a thesaurus please)
No spelling or grammatical mistakes
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ReplyDeleteDear Quaid
ReplyDeleteI think your poem is really excellent it's perfect.
P.S. you spelt lightning wrong