Friday, 30 November 2012
Thursday, 29 November 2012
My Comment to Tim - By Quaid
This is my comment I made to My friend Tim on his Bio Poem. A bio poem is a short list that tells someone about yourself. It is also list to help someone learn about you. I think that it was very interesting. If you would like to see his Bio-Poem click on the website below.
Tuesday, 27 November 2012
My Bio Poem - Quaid
My Bio Poem
Quaid
Is: independent, co-operative, successful, creative
Son of Rhonda and Taylor
Brother of : Kyra, Shaye, Jorjah, Leigh and Carla.
Lover of: Family, Art, Science, Sports and Computers.
Who feels : Enthusiastic (coming to school), Intelligent (All day at school), Tired-out (Bed time).
Who gives: Love to my Family, gratefulness when I`ve been given something, Thankful for my family for supporting me.
Who fears: Heights, Spiders and large objects or animals.
Who would like to see: The Titanic shipwreck, My family that has passed away to have a longer life and have a better environment to live in.
Who lives in Panmure, Auckland, New Zealand
Fletcher
My Comments to Cody and Tim - By Quaid
Monday, 26 November 2012
Tuesday, 20 November 2012
Wallwisher about Waitangi Day - By Quaid and Tevita
This is Tevita and I`s Wallwisher we made about Waitangi Day. Please have a look and leave a comment.
My Oswego Result - By Quaid
My Story about the Grandma and the lost keys - By Quaid
One day there was an old lady named Judy. She lived in a house just up on the hill. This lucky lady had lots of money to spend because she won huge amounts of money four times in one day! She won $1,000,000,000 from the Lotto, $25,000 from Big Wednesday, $10,000 from Keno and $75,000 from a scratchie. Her husband Joseph was so excited when he heard the great news, he leapt in the air and couldn't stop singing, even in the shower.
Judy had a job that she had to do every night and that was to take her husband`s shoes outside. That was a tricky job to do because she had to put on gloves that she used to wash the dishes. After she had finished her 2 minute highly deadly job, she had to soak the gloves in bleach to get the stink out. That night they had butter chicken and naan bread for dinner. Even though she has lots of money she refuses to buy life insurance. This lady is not an ordinary lady. She acts as if she is as young as a teenager.
Once when she was getting into her flash, cool and rich looking Ferrari to go home from the shops ,she lost her keys . She was as stressed as a bear when the forest is burning and she tried to hide it. But her plan had not been thought out well. She remembered that her husband really needed his medication or this could be a life or death situation. She looked every where and remembered it could be in the Ferrari. So she looked and looked and for it as she was waiting, secretly trying to retrace her steps.
On the other side of the shop there was a man who looked respectful so the grandma put on her helpless voice and she pretended to cry out “Oh no! I have lost my keys. I wonder where they are” Her plan worked because the man started to walk over. “What`s the matter ma`am?" he asked. She replied “I have lost my keys"."He said "Oh, I have found some around the corner. Are these them?”he asked curiously “Yes they are. Thank you so much”she gratefully called as he was walking away. All together this day was an adventure. The grandma`s husband got his medicine just in time! And now Judy does not have to do her old job at night.
Friday, 16 November 2012
Art: Reflecting on my Abstract Painting By Quaid
Art: Reflecting on my Abstract Painting
1. Are you pleased with your abstract painting? why / why not?
Yes because it looks very good and it turned out the way I wanted it to
2. What did you find easy when you created your abstract painting?
Ruling up my grid
3. What part did you find tricky when you were creating your abstract painting? -think about painting, ruling it up etc.
Rubbing out the grid lines
4. Who / What helped you when you were painting?
Ruler, pencil, rubber and Miss Paton
5. What would you do differently next time? Think about: colours, painting, ruling of grid, etc.
Change colour choice. I would change it to blue because it would show up better.
6. What frustrated you when you created your abstract painting?
The mistakes I made with the splatters of paint. going into my ruled up areas.
Thursday, 15 November 2012
My Presentation about Diwali - By Quaid
This is my Presentation about Diwali. Have a look and please leave a comment
My comment I made to TCTV about Tamaki One Direction - By Quaid
My Rubric on My presentation - By Quaid
This is my rubric on my presentation and I am pretty good all up. I need to work on my knowledge on topic and summarising of information.
Tuesday, 13 November 2012
My Popplet By Quaid
This is my Popplet about Friedrich Vordemberge-Gildewart and his Art. His style is abstract. He lived from 1899 - 1962
Wednesday, 7 November 2012
My Narrative - By Quaid
Once long ago, there was a Kiwi family of four. In this family there is a mum, Louise who does all of the cooking, a dad, Billy who likes to lean back and watch t.v, a sister, Anna who cries over nothing all the time and a brother, Mark who never does his chores and his room is a pigsty.
One day Billy and Louise thought that they should go on vacation. So they decided that they would go to Australia. They discussed it over dinner the next day. The children cheered with excitement and they started to pack. Anna was so excited she couldn't even sleep! The next day they finished packing and they drove to the Airport.
In Australia there is something that everybody wants. Billy wants to go for a sleep, Louise wants to eat, Anna wants to play with her dolls and Mark wants to go to a theme park. Until... Bang! There is a storm on its way. Everybody heads to shelter. “I’ll get the kids’’Billy screamed to Louise. They all ran to the house but the door was locked. ‘‘NO! We're going to die!’’ they all cried.
Billy came up with an idea. “Everybody run to the car and don’t look back”Billy said. Luckily the car was open and Louise had a spare key.
They drove to the airport and hopped on the next plane that was cheap and available. They all did not know where they were going but there was no time to check. “Konichiwa”, people said. “Mum where are we?”Anna and Mark whispered. “We are in China.”Mum replied. So it all turned out to be fine. A kiwi family turned into a Chinese family in 2 days. They all lived happily in China, if they knew how to that is!
The end
Thursday, 1 November 2012
My Narrative Check list - By Quaid
Narrative Checklist
| Narrative Criteria |  * |  * |  * |
| I can write an orientation |  * | ||
| I can describe where the story takes place |  * | ||
| I can describe when the story takes place |  * | ||
| I can describe how the story begins |  * | ||
| I can introduce my characters |  * | ||
| I can define my characters’ personalities |  * | ||
| I can describe what my characters look like |  * | ||
| I can create a problem that my characters experience |  * | ||
| I can include a resolution - how the problem / situation was solved |  * | ||
| I can write a final concluding statement |  * | ||
| I can use a variety of language features, e.g. active verbs, conjunctions, similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia, personification |  * |
Surface Features Checklist
| Surface Features Criteria |  * |  * |  * |
| I can write in full sentences |  * | ||
| I can sequence my ideas clearly |  * | ||
| I can use complex sentences |  * | ||
| I can vary sentence beginnings |  * | ||
| I can use conjunctions e.g. “and” correctly |  * | ||
| I can use capital letters correctly |  * | ||
| I can use full stops correctly |  * | ||
| I can spell all my words correctly |  * | ||
| I can proof read my writing |  * | ||
| I can edit my writing-by making changes to the vocabulary e.g. said - yelled, asked, etc. |  * | ||
| I can write in paragraphs |  * | ||
Subscribe to:
Posts (Atom)