My Narrative - By Quaid

Once long ago, there was a Kiwi family of four. In this family there is a mum, Louise who does all of the cooking, a dad, Billy who likes to lean back and watch t.v, a sister, Anna who cries over nothing all the time and a brother, Mark who never does his chores and his room is a pigsty.

One day Billy and Louise thought that they should go on vacation. So they decided that they would go to Australia. They discussed it over dinner the next day. The children cheered with excitement and they started to pack. Anna was so excited she couldn't even sleep! The next day they  finished packing and they drove to the Airport.

In Australia there is something that everybody wants. Billy wants to go for a sleep, Louise wants to eat, Anna wants to play with her dolls and Mark wants to go to a theme park. Until... Bang! There is a storm on its way. Everybody heads to shelter. “I’ll get the kids’’Billy screamed to Louise. They all ran to the house but the door was locked. ‘‘NO! We're going to die!’’ they all cried.

Billy came up with an idea. “Everybody run to the car and don’t look back”Billy said. Luckily the car was open and Louise had a spare key.

They drove to the airport and hopped on the next plane that was cheap and available. They all did not know where they were going but there was no time to check. “Konichiwa”, people said. “Mum where are we?”Anna and Mark whispered. “We are in China.”Mum replied. So it all turned out to be fine. A kiwi family turned into a Chinese family in 2 days. They all lived happily in China, if they knew how to that is!

The end