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Book: An Edwardian girls diary
It was a late night when they were awoken from the chaos.. Margaret, Mrs Carstairs and Mr Carstairs were frightened. The were aboard the First class deck when such freightment shook the cruise boat and which was not meant to sink . They panicked, snatching their favourite possessions. They were ordered, in a disorderly manner, by the crew to put on the life jackets. They were aboard collapsible boat C . By now several SOS transmissions were sent to the Carpathia. They were one of the last boats to reach the Carpathia. This story is one of the best. These memories are one of the worlds worst. I hope this never happens again.
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